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9. An elementary bilingual teacher asks you to come to her class to talk to her students about how you used to celebrate the holidays with your family. First you want your Spanish teacher to hear what you plan to say. Be sure to include where you used to celebrate most family holidays, what you used to do, who got together with you to celebrate, and what your favorite family holiday was and why.

Your answer should be 1-2 paragraphs.

Normalmente nos pasamos las vacaciones en casa o ir a nuestra casa primos.
Si se trata ya sea Navidad o Pascua llegamos a casa de la iglesia y por lo general comer lo hemos preparado el día anterior. Entonces o pasaríamos el día que relaja o iríamos a nuestra casa de los primos o vendrían a nosotros. Entonces nuestra abuela y nuestro tío se unirían a nosotros. Así es como la mayoría de mis vacaciones van.

We normally spend the holiday at home or go to our cousins house.
If it is either Christmas or Easter we come home from church and usually eat whatever we prepared the day before. Then we would either spend the day relaxing or we would go to our cousins house or they would come to us. Then our grandma and our uncle would join us. That is how most of my holidays go.