02.10 Kick It Up a Notch Assignment

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Jellyfish population been growing over the past years out of control.These jellyfish blooms have also caused serious problems for power stations.According to the human impact of major jellyfish blooms,The moon coastal areas around the world have struggled with similar jellyfish blooms,as these populations explosions are known things are worse in the fishing business,where blooms have wiped out billions of dollars in earnings over the past few decades.Jellyfish can undoubtedly cause ecological and economic problems for humans. Mass outbreaks of jellyfish can overrun fish farms, block cooling pipes of power stations, burst fishing nets and damage tourist businesses. Their stings can also cause a severe allergic reaction known as anaphylaxis and even kill people.The jellyfish found its way into the Black Sea and the jellyfish eats the mnemiopsis jellyfish and that cuts down the population.This allows more fish eggs and the fishermen to have jobs again and the jellyfish are creating a more balanced ecosystem.Although this has saved the Black Sea, Scientists worry about using the jellyfish in other seas.”We are thinking about using the jellyfish in other seas, but we are concerned”.There is a real fear of negative ecological consequences from introducing new species

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Fishermen in the Black Sea have jobs again thanks to the jellyfish.The jellyfish eats the mnemiopsis jellyfish which has cut down the population, allowing the survival or more fish eggs.Scientists have had the idea of using these jellyfish in other seas affected by the mnemiopsis jellyfish,but they’re unsure how these jellyfish with ecosystem in these other seas.

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