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Which statement tells where a paragraph break should be in this dialogue?

"Hi Monica. How are you?" Ellen asked. "I'm doing well, thanks," Monica replied. "How are you feeling?" "I’m fine, and I'm glad you stopped by. I have something to show you," Ellen said. “I found these old photographs of us when we were little. Look at them. They’re just too precious.”

A.
A paragraph break should come after Monica replied.

B.
Paragraph breaks should come after Ellen asked and "How are you feeling?" and Ellen said.

C.
Paragraph breaks should come after Ellen asked and "How are you feeling?"

D.
No paragraph breaks are needed.

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antonsandiego
I guess the paragraph break should be after the B) Ellen asked and "How are you feeling?" and Ellen said. Because while reading this dialog, reader need a pause between the information which these characters exchange. In my opinion, there must be graphical and emotional space between their introduction and next action that hasn't revealed yet. Also, I'd choose B to make this conversation looks alive.

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